Addiction is a desire that overwhelms body and soul. There’s nothing wrong with wanting things in life, but people often begin to think more about their desire than they think of themselves. When this happens, they lose sense of who they are and what they are about. For Amy Winehouse, her addiction killed her. It wasn’t the crack. It wasn’t the heroin. It was the alcohol that she began drinking at age 14. She drank every day. More specifically, she was a nervous and frightened performer. She claimed she needed alcohol to get on stage. At a certain point she would drink before every performance. Then she began drinking during every performance. Once she got so drunk, she would continue into the night. At a certain point, she couldn’t stop. Although the people around her loved her and tried to help her, she refused to go to rehab: “No!, No!, No!” When she died at the age 27, she had been drinking no n-stop for days. Her blood alcohol was THREE times the legal limit. The autopsy showed that the alcohol depressed her central nervous system and brought about respiratory arrest. That’s medical talk. In other words, Amy drank herself to death
In my class workshops, I introduce Jay's Definition Mindmap. I encourage my students to choose questions and writing prompts from my mindmap (below) that apply to their essay topics. Creating extended definitions for their essays will be both FUN and MEANINGFUL. The definition paragraphs will provide important dimension to their writing. Their definitions aren't coming from someone else; they are are coming from their own knowledge and experience.
Estimados Estudiantes: Choose 4-5 prompts from my chart to help you develop your definitions. Skip the prompts you don't like. Respond with 2-3 sentences or each prompt. Create your own order. Use your essay topics to illustrate your defintion. Copy and Paste everything together. You will see your extended definition appear before your eyes. This is going to be great. You will see. Keep Working Hard!

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